How the book really began was because of a persistent case of insomnia. I was crazy busy and walking in my door every night at 9-10pm. Generally, I use reading to tire my eyes out so I can get some rest, but it wasn't working. I always been the type of person that it takes a lot for my brain to shut down and nothing was working. So I decided to try getting down on paper the idea that was kicking around in my head. Now, I write reports, grants, and various other things for a living, so the last thing that I wanted to do at the end of the day was write some more!  But it worked, I wrote 2 pages a night from about 10 to midnight and about 5 pages on the weekend. And slowly but surely, Intrigue: The Night Muse Trilogy was born. 



I literally made every mistake a first-time writer could make. I bookended my story--I wrote the beginning, middle, and end. Then, it was time to connect them. Unfortunately, I chose to connect the middle to the end first. This meant that when I connected the beginning to the middle that any story detail that I changed in the beginning--I had to jump forward to make it match the ending parts--this added about a month to the process. I also learned that you had to make your lead character sympathetic and flawed. You want more of the outcast than the prom queen. I also learned that my pivotal moment in my story arc came to late. All these things had to be dealt with. 


Then came the never ending process of editing. My first issue was that the average YA book is about 75,000 words. The first draft was 125,000. I edited the manuscript myself the first 2xs. I shortened the text to about 110,000 with the first 2 edits. Then, I talked my friend into editing for me. I thought she would have very little to edit.  She was fantabulous and gave me back a bleeding red ink manuscript back. Apparently, writing form 10-Midnight makes me prone to typos and lack of question marks. I had at least 10 full edits before I felt comfortable with handing over the final draft of 96,000 words. 
 


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10/10/2011 06:59

Congratulations on publishing your book! Beautiful website, too. :)

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Angela
01/13/2012 13:04

Just finished the book, read it in one day. Absolutely loved it. I want more! Are you working on the next? Do we have a release date? Ok, I'm done ranting. The book was fabulous and I want more. I look forward to your next book :)

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01/16/2012 17:57

About half way done with the next one. Should be out in May or early June. Having fun with a couple of the new characters.....one is like Sheldon from Big Bang Theory but female and kicks a lot more eyas--her name is Eris...a lot more action and a little more humor in this book. However, the characters keep straying from my outline which is making it take longer than anticipated.

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alice
01/19/2012 06:55

cant wait for the next book!!!! i hope you dont have too much trouble, because i positively loved the first one!

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Stacey
01/21/2012 14:29

I might be looking for people to read a draft of my new book when I am ready. I will post it and ask for emails. Thanks for all the kind words!

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alysha
09/03/2012 19:39

I started the 1st book 2 days ago and just finished. I couldn't put it down...excited to see how it ends...really rooting for rafe but I guess its anyones game right...keep it up. Thank you!!!

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    When I was about 12, one of my plane friends (I am talking about you Mindy) and I put pen to paper and created our very first story. Unfortunately, we buried it in a time capsule that I have never been able to find again:( But I loved creating and going to places that I hadn't gotten to experience in my small town. This is what also attracted to me to my life long passion for reading. 

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